If

If she would have said something encouraging, he would have been vindicated. All of the countless hours spent bent over the computer, the calculator, and the microscope; all of the figuring and hypothesizing; all of his frustration—he would have been victorious, affirmed.

It didn’t have to be words, really. He would have been happy if she’d even given him a slight smile or nod.

“Your hypothesis is wrong.”

“What?”
“You obviously didn’t read the study I gave you last week. Your hypothesis is based on the old Geraut theory, which is faulty information; therefore, your results are not legitimate. You need to start over from scratch. Tomorrow I want to see a proposal—a detailed proposal—for this next experiment. We can’t afford to waste lab supplies.”

A gentle whoosh of air; emptiness where she’d been.

If only she would have at least acknowledged his efforts.

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